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WRITING CRAFT: PARATAXIS

Cut it down, build it up, let rhythm speak louder than reason

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Noam Leon Kaestner
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Julius Caesar’s famous boast, “Veni. Vidi. Vici,” translates to “I came. I saw. I conquered.”

Three short statements with no because or then. Each clause is given equal weight. Their relationship (sequence or cause) is implied rather than spelled out.

Paratactic writing often feels spare and direct. Hemingway’s prose is a classic model, frequently described as spartan, terse, spare, lean. He favored simple sentences and coordinated clauses over elaborate subordination.

The style can come across as choppy or fragmented. Creating a staccato rhythm.

“The steer was down now, his neck stretched out, his head twisted, he lay the way he had fallen.”

Together, they hit the reader in rapid succession. Compressing the scene into an immediate rush.

This kind of syntax gives paratactic writing a palpable intensity. Critics note it can feel “held in check and understated, as in Scripture”. Because it doesn’t explain connections, parataxis can also lend an air of mystery or ambiguity. There’s a lot between the lines.


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Hypotaxis

Start by contrasting parataxis with its opposite.

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